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The dress lengths are as follows: S = 58.66 inches, M = 59.05 inches, L = 59.37 inches, XL = 59.68 inches. Please note that there may be a deviation of 0.4 to 1.18 inches across different sizes. The stated lengths are for reference purposes only, and your actual dress may differ slightly.
The evening dress most prominent place is the back and sleeves,which will attract attention and getting more praise,Notice the sleeve is on the right